process example for Small Press Carol

Original text

No, nor did he believe it even now. Though he looked the phantom through and through, and saw it standing before him; though he felt the chilling influence of its death-cold eyes; and marked the very texture of the folded kerchief bound about its head and chin, which wrapper he had not observed before; he was still incredulous, and fought against his senses.

“How now!” said Scrooge, caustic and cold as ever. “What do you want with me?”

“Much!”—Marley’s voice, no doubt about it.


Suggested imagery

Scrooge and Marley facing each other, Scrooge looking astonished and terrified, Marley looking spooky and stern.


Required dialogue and captions

CAPTION 1:  no, nor did he believe it even now.

CAPTION 2:  though he looked the phantom through and through, and saw it standing before him.

CAPTION 3:  though he felt the chilling influence of its death-cold eyes.

CAPTION 4:  he was still incredulous, and fought against his senses.

SCROOGE 1:  how now!  what do you want with me?

MARLEY 1:  much!

CAPTION 5:  marley’s voice, no doubt about it.


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